I genuinely dislike this as an image. Not simply because it's quite a dark subject matter (the Spitpaint theme was "Together for life"), but because it's oversaturated and the shapes are all washy and ill-conceived.
But this is precisely the point I guess. Some days (a lot of days!), you're just having a bad art day. You can't see things well or execute them nicely. But you create it nonetheless because you just have to keep doing it in order to improve. With any luck, a bit of hindsight on this should reveal what a massive pair of pants it is.